What do you think of my new poem?

The Old Cobbler








The Old Cobbler was pounding soles at 9


And was wealthier by 10 when sleep took him at 5





Twas strange indeed when at the stroke of 3


came a knock from that crafty old man





The oil fueled light made golden the night


and cast shadows on the old oak floor





As the old devil stepped the boards they all wept


from the weight of his timeless cries





Old Cobbler awoke as the devil he spoke


and asked "Why have you come to see me?"





"A pair of shoes I require that can withstand the fire


and out run the good lord up above."





"oh Devil you see just a simple a cobbler I be


and agent of death I am not."





"I offer you rewards for your shoes that beat Lords


and I give you one year to complete them."





The oil shadows danced 'round this sad circumstance


as the poor cobbler questioned his needs





He looked to and fro at the tools in a row


and wondered what profit could buy





...... to be continued

What do you think of my new poem?
wow that was awesome,keep up the good work,you'll be writer one day if your not already
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Reply:Yes I like it!





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Reply:i really like the poem but i donot like the fact that it goes against God
Reply:one i do not know who or what a devil is nor a lord. the poem however was interesting. funny in a good sort a way, but not funny.
Reply:very good
Reply:wow you must of put a lot into that I like it